Tuesday, February 1, 2011

Magpie Tales #51: Pieces

P ie c e s

Brok
en

di
vi
ded

red
raw
rugged

Worn
chipped
old
biased

Muted
mellowed
motionless

Jagged
crumbling


Wisened

Pieces


This poem was inspired by the photo from Magpie Tales. Your feedback is greatly appreciated.
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31 comments:

  1. Gigi AnnFebruary 1, 2011 at 4:39:00 PM PST

    I like it you are very creative.

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  2. SukoFebruary 1, 2011 at 4:43:00 PM PST

    Thanks, Gigi Ann. I was still editing it when you stopped by!

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  3. bermudaonionFebruary 1, 2011 at 4:46:00 PM PST

    I agree with Gigi - you're very creative!

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  4. SukoFebruary 1, 2011 at 4:47:00 PM PST

    Kathy, I'm probably a bit insane, as well! :)

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  5. Kristen HaskellFebruary 1, 2011 at 5:13:00 PM PST

    What an interesting poem the structure makes it!

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  6. SukoFebruary 1, 2011 at 5:19:00 PM PST

    Kristen, words as bricks. . . .

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  7. BookQuoterFebruary 1, 2011 at 6:05:00 PM PST

    Only a true artist could have thought of it this way! The best so far!

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  8. RJ ClarkenFebruary 1, 2011 at 6:09:00 PM PST

    What a brilliant idea - words as bricks! Your mind must really work in an amazingly creative way.

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  9. BhargaviFebruary 1, 2011 at 6:16:00 PM PST

    beautiful words!

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  10. Mel uFebruary 1, 2011 at 6:21:00 PM PST

    very creative and thought provoking

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  11. SukoFebruary 1, 2011 at 7:00:00 PM PST

    Thank you all for being so kind to me! :)

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  12. dsFebruary 1, 2011 at 7:04:00 PM PST

    Wonderful! I'm so glad you decided to join in, especially with such a creative and thoughtful poem.

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  13. RudyFebruary 1, 2011 at 8:59:00 PM PST

    Rugged is perfect :-)

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  14. PAFebruary 1, 2011 at 10:24:00 PM PST

    Nice! I like it!

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  15. ReflectionsFebruary 1, 2011 at 10:34:00 PM PST

    Creative take, nice form... each brick placed specific to its task. Nice.

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  16. Deborah LawrensonFebruary 2, 2011 at 1:06:00 AM PST

    Love it. What the words and picture make you do is go in close and look, really look.

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  17. LouiseFebruary 2, 2011 at 3:12:00 AM PST

    Great take on the prompt!

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  18. christineFebruary 2, 2011 at 4:05:00 AM PST

    I loved the way you did this with the words written down as though bricks... very clever.

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  19. ZibileeFebruary 2, 2011 at 5:57:00 AM PST

    Very nice! I also like how it was arranged. I wish I could do something like this, but feel that I all that creative!

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  20. Brother OllieFebruary 2, 2011 at 6:29:00 AM PST

    Original take on this pic.

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  21. LolamouseFebruary 2, 2011 at 7:56:00 AM PST

    I love your original take on this prompt! Very interesting how you played with the form of the words! Thanks for visiting my blog too!

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  22. gautami tripathyFebruary 2, 2011 at 8:41:00 AM PST

    So so good...

    uneven

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  23. Natalie WFebruary 2, 2011 at 9:33:00 AM PST

    Love the words you used. Beautifully done!
    Natalie :0)

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  24. samantha.1020February 2, 2011 at 12:49:00 PM PST

    I loved the way that you structured this...very nicely done.

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  25. LisaFebruary 2, 2011 at 7:38:00 PM PST

    Well done and I love the form!

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  26. HelenaFebruary 3, 2011 at 1:47:00 PM PST

    I love the all-over-the-place format. An added boost to an interesting piece!

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  27. Bellezza February 3, 2011 at 4:51:00 PM PST

    Suko, I didn't know you could write poetry! Wonderful images with words!!

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  28. The BookwormFebruary 4, 2011 at 5:18:00 PM PST

    I love the way you presented it!

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  29. Dave KingFebruary 5, 2011 at 4:03:00 AM PST

    Wonderful, so much so succinctly said.

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  30. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallFebruary 5, 2011 at 5:29:00 PM PST

    elegant words.

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  31. Laura's ReviewsMarch 29, 2016 at 5:47:00 AM PDT

    I think its a great poem. I also like the artistry of the words. I hope you had a wonderful Easter!

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