Saturday, April 14, 2012

Magpie Tales #112: Virtual Shell

                                                                                                       


The only way there is to take a shell and float over.
Oh, really.
Yes, you must pass through, not disturb any of the good eggs in your path.
Okay.
Be careful please.
Yes, I will be. How long is the trip?
That depends, it may seem like a long time; take it one day at a time.
I am in a hurry.
Did you have breakfast?
Yes, I had some eggs.
Excellent. (Aren't you glad I didn't say egg-cellent?)
Yes, thank you.
You're welcome, now be on your way.
But my shell, it's. . .
Broken? Cracked?
Yes.
That doesn't matter.
Are you sure?
A virtual shell will never fail you, just GO!
Okay, good-bye! 
 Bon voyage!


Picture and writing prompt from Magpie Tales. Your comments and feedback are welcomed as always.
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18 comments:

  1. Tumblewords:April 14, 2012 at 10:18:00 PM PDT

    It is hard to know how long it will take! :) Love this...

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  2. LydiaApril 15, 2012 at 1:32:00 AM PDT

    Totally whimsical. I loved the trip. (Just laughed aloud when I came to "Yes, I had some eggs.")

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  3. Brian MillerApril 15, 2012 at 3:41:00 AM PDT

    haha egg-cellent cracked me up....fun one today...smiles.

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  4. Felicity Grace TerryApril 15, 2012 at 5:22:00 AM PDT

    A virtual shell will never fail you ...... such wonderful words of wisdom.

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  5. The BookwormApril 15, 2012 at 6:20:00 AM PDT

    I love it Suko, this made me smile this morning. And I like ...'it may seem like a long time...take it one day at a time...'

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  6. bermudaonionApril 15, 2012 at 9:24:00 AM PDT

    Very fun! Your tale fits the picture perfectly!

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  7. dsApril 15, 2012 at 11:59:00 AM PDT

    Ha ha! Very clever! Loved the eggy breakfast and "a virtual shell will never fail you." Well done, Suko!

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  8. @parridhlanternApril 15, 2012 at 12:10:00 PM PDT

    Enjoyed this , the humour cracked me up.

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  9. Tess KincaidApril 15, 2012 at 12:39:00 PM PDT

    I was expecting you to say egg-cellent...giggle...

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  10. SukoApril 15, 2012 at 1:31:00 PM PDT

    This was fun to write; even more fun was reading all of your kind comments--thanks!

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  11. HarveeApril 15, 2012 at 2:03:00 PM PDT

    I like the idea of floating over everything in a virtual shell.

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  12. JennersApril 15, 2012 at 5:06:00 PM PDT

    I think your narrative fits the picture perfectly! It is EGGSactly right! HAHA!

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  13. YvonneApril 15, 2012 at 6:52:00 PM PDT

    This is great!

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  14. Gigi AnnApril 16, 2012 at 11:58:00 AM PDT

    Well, how cute was that!!?
    Really cute.

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  15. Leslie (Under My Apple Tree)April 16, 2012 at 4:47:00 PM PDT

    A fantasy trip in a shell! How wonderful.

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  16. Gerry (Strummed Words)April 17, 2012 at 4:26:00 PM PDT

    A journey without crashing into others. Nice take on the prompt!

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  17. JamesApril 20, 2012 at 11:02:00 AM PDT

    Great humor in this one. I really like the conversation approach; the two voices come across well.

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    1. SukoApril 20, 2012 at 6:07:00 PM PDT

      Thank you for mentioning the two voices, James. I had fun writing this.

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